So this is my story at the moment, however this is likelysubject to change, due to my ideas changing, through improvement and realism. It is also quite likely that i will want to add smaller details, not mentioned here, to further the plot or drama.
- Bell rings
- Boy runs out to the playground excited
- Boy turns back for someone
- Exasperated, Boy returns off-screen to collect Potatoe-Boy
- With great effort Boy drags Potato-Boy across panning screen to see-saw
- With further effort Boy places Potato-Boy on Left seat of see-saw
- When Potato-Boy's weight is settled on, the Left seat sinks to the floor.
- Boy races to Right seat of see-saw
- Boy cannot get on to his seat. It is too high
- Jumping, Boy grabs hold of seat edge
- Boy scrambles onto bottom of the seat, having no way to reach the top. Boy hangs there contemplating this.
- Potato-Boy slides off Left seat, removing weight
- See-saw swings suddenly onto Boy, squishing him against the floor
This is reflective to adults, who may have done similar things when they were children themselves.
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