I have remade my animatic. This is because the first animatic/idea had too much going on ofr the advert. As a viewer i found it hard to keep up and remember what had happened just previously. This is not what i want for my advert, as i want the audience to be intrigued by the advert and leave with an urge to know more. So the story needs to be more succinct to get the point across.
I have cut two of the scenes, from the beginning of the advert, to give more time for the rest. With this part cut, i find that the advert is not so racy, and the audience can get a feel for the story that i am telling. The new animatic gives more time with each character, so the audience can identify with them and what they are doing.
animatic02 of client project from Diana Jones on Vimeo.
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